RP-Critique/Support/Self Monitoring Club

[gedweyignasia]

Please criticize my RP'ing of my characters past and present! They're listed in my signature. I know I had some atrocious RP practices when I started here, but with help from a few people (shoutout to Telia), I think I improved a bit. With more feedback, I think I can improve more, so hit me.

[Kayne]

Does anyone that's RPed with Tegeus Cromis have any criticicriticism to offer? I'm trying to RP as well as I can with him, started a journal and published some books in Candlekeep, and I like to think I have a fair knowledge of Hoar's teachings, but there's always more you can do/know.

You play a solid character, Killington. You put a lot of thought in Cromis's expressions and reactions. You need intelligence and wisdom to play an intelligent and wise character and I believe you play one well. I haven't interacted as much as I would like to, but I would say a "fatal flaw" would make him much more believable, as well as a few quirks. I am sure you have these, but I haven't noticed them in game yet. (I have seen the extreme paranoia and trepidation in your posts, however.)

[Moridin]

Has anyone that has RPed with Lomith have any criticism to offer?

[JCVD1]

Please criticize my RP'ing of my characters past and present! They're listed in my signature. I know I had some atrocious RP practices when I started here, but with help from a few people (shoutout to Telia), I think I improved a bit. With more feedback, I think I can improve more, so hit me.

You need more perma-killable characters

[ladyawesome]

Please criticize my RP'ing of my characters past and present! They're listed in my signature. I know I had some atrocious RP practices when I started here, but with help from a few people (shoutout to Telia), I think I improved a bit. With more feedback, I think I can improve more, so hit me.

I don't have much to criticize about Aya, minus that every time you leave you loose her essance and she comes back a bit changed everytime.
I love the interactions between Aya and Vali, they are so different every time, her attitude is the best and I can guarantee you have most people laugh g at the stupid things she does. And when she speaks those words are gold.

It is very hard to forget her, head strong..... and head butting!

[Killington]

Does anyone that's RPed with Tegeus Cromis have any criticicriticism to offer? I'm trying to RP as well as I can with him, started a journal and published some books in Candlekeep, and I like to think I have a fair knowledge of Hoar's teachings, but there's always more you can do/know.

You play a solid character, Killington. You put a lot of thought in Cromis's expressions and reactions. You need intelligence and wisdom to play an intelligent and wise character and I believe you play one well. I haven't interacted as much as I would like to, but I would say a "fatal flaw" would make him much more believable, as well as a few quirks. I am sure you have these, but I haven't noticed them in game yet. (I have seen the extreme paranoia and trepidation in your posts, however.)

Thanks for the feedback

I'm trying to up the amount of paranoia and suspicion, he tries to make sure he doesn't have blind spots and that results in being a bit too careful.

[kleomenes]

Does anyone that's RPed with Tegeus Cromis have any criticicriticism to offer? I'm trying to RP as well as I can with him, started a journal and published some books in Candlekeep, and I like to think I have a fair knowledge of Hoar's teachings, but there's always more you can do/know.

Sorry I did not respond to this.

My interactions have been limited so far with Tegeus (I think we are on about a half dozen so far?) but I have enjoyed them. And I have had more interactions by proxy!

I'd echo Kayne's general comments and just add that he is a character who comes across as a priest. You know you are rping with a cleric, if that makes sense, even when he is not spouting the dogma. He has that focus and mindset.

It makes one wonder of the man behind the faith; any distance between the dogma and the man might be interesting to explore for the flaws Kayne suggests.

[kleomenes]

Please criticize my RP'ing of my characters past and present! They're listed in my signature. I know I had some atrocious RP practices when I started here, but with help from a few people (shoutout to Telia), I think I improved a bit. With more feedback, I think I can improve more, so hit me.

I enjoy your characters IG, from my limited interactions they have all been quite believable and distinct, and of course your commitment to permadeath is refreshing!

sarcasm

But I think you do not put enough effort into the biographies written in the relevant forum. Except for Janet's, of course, which is a model biography which I refer people to when we are discussing good writing.

/sarcasm

[Kayne]

Does anyone have any criticism for my stories or my Roleplay as Kayne?

[chad878262]

Kayne should take a bath and plant seeds about him to see if an earth soul can grow flowers. :p. (Another line stolen from Killington!)

The few times we've met in game have been enjoyable, though Cranston doesn't know what to make of the beast...errr, man...

[Snarfy]

Ya know... I've never really felt inclined to post here and ask others to critique my role-play, but I've always wondered what I would post here if I did.

And now I know.

Instead of asking you analyze my role-play or characters(truly, it wouldn't phase me either way), I thought I would do something more fun:

On a scale of one to three emoticon faces of your choice(the number being an indication of the amounts of the various feelings attached to said emoticons), my question to you is this :

How does my main character, Jassin, make your character feel when your character sees him?

An example of this could be: (The meaning of which might indicate: When my character sees that elf I get mad, and when he insults my toon he/she wants to crush that puny elfs skull in, which gives me happy thoughts in the end)

Feel free to have fun with it. Aaaand go!

[chad878262]

Make of that what you will...

[Endelyon]

I always wanted to post here. So finding myself with some free time, I am. Critiques please. Of Endelyon or any of my characters, really -- just RP in general. I'd like to hear what people think. Let me know what you think I can do better.

Brutal honesty please & ty!

[Blackface]

How does my main character, Jassin, make your character feel when your character sees him?

[Nomster]

How does my main character, Jassin, make your character feel when your character sees him?