A har Thar! Thar D. Kogan. ((Warning: bit violent))

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A har Thar! Thar D. Kogan. ((Warning: bit violent))

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DISCLAMER:
This back story is more in line with a rating of M for Mature only! While none explicit I will be touching on subjects some players may not be comfortable with. That being said this is "My Story"
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First Name: Thar
Middle Name: Dah
Last Name: Kogan

Appearance:
Race:Half Orc
Age: 20
Height 6'7''
Weight: 275lbs
Eyes: Red
Hair: Dark Red
Facial Hair Style: Full Beard

Personality Profile:
General Health: Well built, heavily scared
Deity: Herne
Initial Alignment: Chaotic Evil/Neutral
Profession: Hunter, Warrior, Guard
Base Class & Proposed Development:Hunter((Secrect))
Habits/Hobbies: Hunting, Battles, Collecting other knickknacks
Languages: Fluent in: Orc, Damaran, Yypyak. Understands: Common.
Weapon of Choice: Anything to kill the prey. Favors Longbow.
Likes: The wild, to Hunt, Battle, Survival, Reptiles
Dislikes: 99.9% of Elves, Dwarves, Half-Elves, Agronak.
Fears: Eisoptrophobia- Seeing oneself in a Mirror.

Born 7 Eleint, 1331 DR.
Year of the Leaping Dolphin
Born under the Sign of the Spear
and with Disseminating Selûne under the sign of the Spear

Those born under the sign of the Spear are practical, capable, and steadfast in adversity, cautious, logical, and efficient. They have good business sense but prefer to assist rather than lead. In relationships, they are supportive, protective, and possessive.

Eleint 07, 1331
Temperature:
Low: 50
High: 70
Effective Temperature: -
Winds: From tropics at 20 mph.
With a Windchill of 5
Precipitation: Heavy rain
Relative Humidity:
Morning: Moderate
Evening: High
Dawn is at 5:54
Number of daylight hours: 12.2
Selûne: 3rd Qtr
Visibility reduced due to rain (-4 on listening and ranged attacks, exposed flames extinguished).


http://www.realmshelps.net/charbuild/bday.shtml forgotten realms "Zodiac"
http://www.realmshelps.net/faerun/weather.shtml Forgotten realms "Weather"

Background:
Birth: The Savage Day


In the woods near the moors of Thar faint screams are heard over the roaring claps of thunder, as the rain beat down on the trees, a crack of a whip snaps once as female screams. The air fills with silence before the cry of a child is heard. Walking out of a cave a young-looking Agronak is seen holding a Half-Orc infant. Gogran, the tribe Chief, follows holding a blooded ax in one hand and a mass of hair in the other. Lifting the tangled mass high in the air orcish warcries fill the night with a clap of thunder illuminating the dismembered head.

WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAGH!!


Age 8: Fight, or Die.
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The young half-orc of the tribe, Thar was often looked down upon. He was tossed aside, had his food stolen, and even beaten by the other orcs for simply being a half-breed. Finally fed up with his treatment he took a stand, knowing that strength would often bring respect, stepping into the ring he was ready for the fight he would have to face. Many of the orcs would snarl at him as he entered for a half-breed to take part was unheard of. This was a battle for Orcs to take the claim at their Ranks within the Tribe. Gogran, with an amused grin, allows Thar to continue. Wanting to see if he would make a name for himself, or die as a failure.

As night falls the drums beat in a fury as the air fills with grunts and warcries of the tribe. Stepping from the hut, a rather large brute of an Orc, towers over Thar in the torch-lit arena. The Orc, whose face painted with the print of the tribal shaman favor, takes one look at Thar, not even of age at this point, and snarls with anger as he turns to Gogran and the guttural orcish language shouts.

"You bring me a child and expect me to fight? Coward! I challenged you!"
Gogran chuckles lightly and replies.
"If this is no challenge for you then end it quickly. If you do so then you will have your match, consider this your warm-up, and never question my word again!"
With a grunt the brute nods and turns to face Thar seeing now the determination in his eyes for the first time. The drums grow louder as Gogran stands from his chair and in a commanding Shout!

Begin!

The brute grabs at the mace and charges thinking to end it with a single blow. However Thar, using his small size and speed manages to roll out of the brute's swing only to have his other hand knock him back with a firm back fist to the side of the head. Thar makes a quick recovery rolling over his back and launching himself back to his feet, he charges at the gloating brute, with a fast and hard hit to the side, the brute growls and swings his arm back pushing Thar away. He turns on his heels and swings the mace once more striking Thar and forcing him to the edge of the ring, blood pours from his wound on his head as the Brute walks over and puts his foot on Thar's skull.
"You want me to Kill this one Gogran, I will end this filthy half breed as easily as I will end you!"

The Brute begins to push Thar's face into the ground ready to end the fight, Thar reaches out and grabs a broken handle to a tool or weapon and shoves it deep in the Brute's side. With a roar, the Brute stumbles back pulling the handle out as Thar charges at the brute bringing him down in surprise. Thar punches at the Brute's wounded side and face in a flurry of blows, finally grabbing the mace to follow up on his assault. When the Brute begins to stop Thar drops the mace, placing his hand on the Brute's head and with a sharp twist.

SNAP


It is over. Thar brings himself to his feet, breathing heavily with his blood dripping from his head, stands to face the Chief. Gogran nods once with a wicked grin and then retires to his tent, the orcs howl with delight as the drums roar up again. His task done, Thar retreats back to the tiny cave.




Age 10: Lost in the Woods./Yak-Kak


As Thar grew older his battle was starting to become forgotten. Again the tribe began to treat him poorly, only now they expected more from him, they sent him out to hunt and fish. Often leaving for days with a small group of Orcs, he quickly learned how to pick out Scents of creatures. One day he wanders off from the pack, after the smell of a large boar, one he has never smelled before only to learn that it was a mistake to go alone.
He sees the mammoth of a beast treading not far from him. The creature must have been 9 feet long and weighing 1,700 pounds. Large ivory, jagged tusks jutting from its lower jaw with massive spine grow out of its thick grey pelt. It digs at the ground with its thick fur-covered hooves, turning its head to a sound of a branch snapping, the boar looks straight at Thar, its eyes filled with fire as it lowers his head with a snort.
It charges forth, without even needing to think Thar flees for his life darting around a small tree. The dire boar simply smashes through it and continues after Thar.
The sound of rushing water starts to fill the air as Thar runs to it without thinking and comes to a halt as he looks down the side of a waterfall. The crashing of branches is heard behind him, only one thing goes through Thar's head.


Jump!

Finally waking up to a throbbing pain in his chest, as he looks down at the large gash across his chest. Slowly he crawls away from the water's edge and leans against a tree. With a bit of luck, he finds a few healing herbs to clean out the wound and stop the bleed. Using the tree for support Thar lifts himself back to his feet and stumbles his way up the riverbank of Stojanow River.
As the night begins to set in he finds a cave along the riverside and collapses, as he drifts quickly to sleep. Waking up to a sharp pain in his side he opens his eyes to find a Kobold poking him with a short sword. Thar's eyes snap open with new life as he fights to survive, quickly grabbing the Kobold around his neck choking it as it claws at Thar's arm for its life it says one thing.


"Gnub, ro rohbg."
Thar's eyes widen as the Kobold speaks Orc and drops him to the ground again as he begins coughing up some blood.
"Me Yak-kak, Me helps you, you no-kill."
Yak-Kak brings over a little water to Thar then speaks to him once more.
"Me was Shaman, me can heal you. What is name?"
When Thar opens his mouth to speak, his speech broken and jumbled, closing his mouth as he fails to speak, Yak-Kak tilts his head before turning to a pile of fish.
"Fall steal your speech, you no speak no more, that shame."
"A. . . Har. . . Thar. . ."
Thar says weakly to the Kobold, I am Thar.
With a slight grin.

"Ain't much, but better than none, yes?" Yak-Kak hands Thar a raw fish.
"Eat you need strength, me prep healing herbs."

Over the next few seasons Yak-Kak tells Thar all about his Tribe and home, how it was mostly destroyed everyone in his tribe ran, all because of Kho' Grako, Orc for Grey Swine. As Thar began to walk around again he knew that he had to find his tribe soon before the frost sets in too deep. Yak-Kak tried to reason with Thar not to go until the frost had gone but simply refused with the shake of his head, giving Yak-Kak a nod of thanks he sets off into woods once more with nothing more than a few clothes he has and a bone dagger. With a final shout, Yak-Kak calls back to Thar.

"Don't forget me, Me need your help one day!!"



Age 11-12: Kho' Grako. Returning home.


Weeks pass by as the frost set in, the trees turn white with heavy snow. Crouching low, looking for any tracks for some sort of food, the cold, icy winds bite at Thar's exposed flesh. Using his wooden spear to help him stand he continues on, his body thinning from lack of food. A faint scent begins to linger in the air, somewhat familiar to him, wondering what it might be he follows. The thrill of the hunt kicks in once more, he forgets his hunger, his pain, everything clears from his head but to track the prey. He is easily able to keep the normal running pace of the Orcs as he hunts the beast down.
Thar follows the smell for miles, the sun high in the sky, it casts an eerie light through the snow-covered trees as he starts to close in on the source of the scent. Following the large prints left in the snow, he stalks his prey, pushing aside the leaves of a tree he sees the beast in a small clearing. Its Kho' Grako, the large dire boar that had chased him off a cliff that fateful day. Call it fate, call it luck, call it whatever you want but Thar knew this was how he was going to survive this winter. Slowly backing away he moves around Kho' Grako, to an area with two thick trees rather close together. Picking up a large rock Thar snorts once before throwing the rock at Kho' Grako.

Snarl

The beast turns eyes filled with fury, anger, and even pain. It makes a mad dash at Thar ready to plow through him with its tusks. Dropping low Thar readies to leap, and just as the beast begins to close in, he jumps. Grabbing a branch with one hand as the boar wedges itself between the two trees, Thar lets go and falls spear first right into the beast. Letting out a loud roar it whips and thrashes about trying to throw Thar from its back but there is no way Thar is going to let it get away. Pulling forth the bone dagger he thrusts in deep into the boar's neck holding on as he twists it about under its flesh, blood staining the snow red.
Finally, Kho' Grako manages to throw him off and get loose, turning on Thar in a hellish fury driving forth once more set to kill. Fight or flight kicking in the beast charges faster than Thar could even think to jump. Instead, bracing himself, and grabs the boar by the tusks sliding back in the snow straining every muscle in his body. He manages to keep his feet under himself, as he lets out a war cry filling with rage giving the boar's head a sharp twist forcing it on its side. Kho' Grako slides knocking Thar over as it falls until finally stopping against a tree. Quickly Thar grabs his spear forcing it through its heart.

The beast now dead, Thar rises to his feet only to fall over once more from fatigue. Looking at the beast's eyes he feels like he is looking at himself, a Wild creature lost in the woods. Filled with rage and anger for those that have hurt him. After about an hour's rest, the cold begins to nip at him once more realizing that the sun will be setting soon. Thar knows he won't last the night without some kinda warmth, using his dagger he begins to skin the giant Boar as well as taking a large amount of the meat. Finding a cave he sets up a camp with logs for a fire, tonight he will sleep warm with a full belly.

The next month or so became much easier, it seemed that with the death of Kho' Grako more animals have returned to the woods. The season begins to change as the forest begins to green again with the smells of the forest and fire. Wait. . . Fire!? Orcs! the smell of orcs flood the forest and they are closing in fast. Looking for a place to hide Thar makes for a broken tree with a thick hollow log, but just as he gets close to the tree an orc jumps out sword in hand. Another from the left with an ax, from the right a bow, behind him, a large brute with war-mace.
They smell the air for a moment something about Thar is familiar to them, slowly they gather around and overwhelm him easily taking his spear, bound, they take him away. Walking into the camp they drag him to the chief's tent and force him to his knees, the large orc enters the tent for a moment returning with Agronak. A shocked look comes over both of their faces, but that only lasts for a moment as another orc walks out, the new Chief Bross.


"Who this once be? You know this one Shaman?" Bross waves a hand to Thar.
"Yes this is the Gogran's lost half-breed son, the one we thought betrayed us." Agronak uses the end of his staff to lift Thar's head by his chin to look him in the eyes.
"I see, then he will be of use to us, take him away, break him, and mark him. Make sure he can never betray us." Bross turns and returns to his tent.
"Yes, Bross." He looks to the two holding Thar,
"Take him to the caves and see to it he is made comfortable" He says with a wicked smile.



Age 13-15: Escaping the Darkness.


For the next two or so years Thar was keep chained to a cave wall locked away, whipped, and beaten daily. They would only unchain him when they release a wild boar in Thar's cell, he had to fight and kill a boar just to have food for the day. After a while Agronak was able to create a magical rune to scribe into Thar's flesh, this would soon fuse into his blood and become a part of him, almost no way to remove it. This rune has about a 100-foot range on it, and when Bross or Agronak active the rune it forces a Dominate Monster spell-like power on Thar.
Every week during the Battle for rank anyone that challenged Bross would first have to fight Thar. If he ever refused or tried to hold back, Agronak would force Thar into a frenzy making him fight, afterward taking him back to the cave to be lashed again. This continued until he just turned 15.


Thar used his time while unchained to work out and chip away the stone around his chains, it is clear he has worked at them from day one. In the middle of a moonless night, he used his brute strength to break the chains from the walls. Using the little bits of cloth he had with an old boars skull he makes a shoulder pad and rams the door down crushing the skull against the door. The Orc on guard runs in at the sound of the steel crashing to the ground, quickly grabs the orc's head, Thar ends it with a twist from behind, snapping his neck in an instant. Grabbing the hand-ax and small shield he makes for the woods, rushing through steams and covering his tracks the best he can.
The night seems quiet, almost as if none knew he was gone, or at least didn't care. Not wanting to take any chances of being caught again Thar runs for almost 3 days without stopping until he finally drops next to a stream, drinking some water before he climbs a tree and slowly nods off to sleep from exhaustion.

Thar wakes, eyes snap open, as the sun is already setting, hopping out of the tree ready to move and leave this place. He takes one more drink for the stream, filling up a waterskin, Thar stands up only to have an arrow pierce his shoulder just over his heart. In a roar of pain, he darts for the trees, branches lashing him as he runs. Finding a place to hide for a moment he grabs the arrow with a firm grip and pushes the arrow through the wound, if he had pulled it out the arrow would have torn his wound open. Managing to find some herbs, chewing them up, he uses them to clean the wound and slow the bleed.

THUNK

An arrow strikes into the trunk of the tree near his head, ducking down he dashes to where the arrow came from. Sniffing the air he smells the orc chasing him. Just one? That's strange, normally they would send a pack to take care of him. Jump out from behind a tree he swings the hand ax only to have it crash, spark flying off the orc's sword. Thar gets kicked back into a tree, dipping aside as the blade follows into the tree, charging forward slamming the orc into the tree, and following up with an elbow to the head stunning him. Finally, Thar brings the ax down only to have it break against the orc's sword as a knife plunges into his side. They both snarl to one another pulling away, the orc trusts forward in a flurry of quick back-handed dagger strikes.
Another kick to the chest knocking Thar back, the orc throws the dagger at his head. Just barely able to dodge it with only a nip at the earlobe, in return, Thar roars charging ahead he dropkicks the orc back as it trips over a log and falls banging its head on a large rock knocking him out. Thar leaps onto the chest of the orc and in a wail of pain, he begins to beat the orc before finally decapitating it with its own sword.


Returning to the river Thar leaves the head of the orc on a sharpened branch as a warning to all who would follow him. Making his way into the woods bleeding, beaten, and broken. What hope is left?




Age 16: Seeking truth, My home.

Night has come and gone, wandering aimlessly about the wood as the sun begins to rise over the trees. A soft, warming light falls between the branches on Thar's blood-stained face, dropping to his knees he washes his face in a small creek. The babbling of the water lightly crashing over the rocks, the smell of herbs, berries, and pine hovers in the air all around him. He leans back against a tree, holding his wound, taking in the sounds and smells of the forest.
A soft, faint humming is heard as a woman walks over to the brook, then a crash as a basket hits the ground. The woman stands at the water's edge with a look of fear on her face as spots the injured half-orc, opening his eyes looking at her standing there before finally giving a snort as his eyes drift shut once again. To exhausted to move from blood loss, as his hand drops from his bleeding wound. The two seem frozen in time for a moment, no words, no movement. The woman slowly walks over, her voice is soothing and calm.


"It will be okay, please, please let me help you." She kneels down beside him. Thar eyes her a moment before simply nodding.
"My name is Evannie, whats yours?" She runs her hands over his many scars and wounds.
"A har Thar." He speaks in broken, guttural orc. Evannie smiles at Thar pressing her hand to his wound her hand starts to glow with healing magic as his wound slowly heals.
"Arthur, that's a nice name. How did this happen to you, Arthur?" She keeps her focus on healing him as she speaks.
"A har Thar." He says trying to correct her. She finishes healing the wound and moves to sit on a large rock next to him. Finally, Thar takes a good look at her for the first time, she is a beautiful young woman with short red hair and gentle blue-ish green eyes. A light top with a short, knee-length red skirt. On her back is a small short sword that looks as if it has never even been removed from the sheath. Her boots are lightly covered in mud and dirt on her knees and cuffs show she has been working in the dirt somewhere nearby. Looking over to the basket on the floor, a large amount of healing herbs and berries, likely from a farm or grove.
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"I guess you don't talk much, that's okay I don't normally like to talk to people myself." She smiles and continues to ramble.
"I used to come here a lot when I was little, it was a great place to escape to, so very quiet, peaceful. I used to come here when I was sad, my mother grew her herbs and berries here. She used to take me with her humming her lullaby." She pauses for a moment tilting her head down, a tear runs down her cheek. With a sorrowful smile, she continues.
"I don't remember my mother very well, my father said she died when I was very young. He didn't want to tell me how she died for some reason, and I found out why when I overheard members of the village talking about it." She turns looking up thru the trees.
"She was kidnapped, for 10 months, my father searched for her almost none stop, until they found her left outside the village, or at least her head." She starts to tear up.
"After that, they spotted me hiding nearby and stopped talking about it. My father still won't tell me the truth but, I have a few ideas of what happened." She stands up and walks to the basket, pulling out some flowers, setting them down next to an odd-shaped stone marked with some runes or writing. Turning back at Thar she holds out some bread and berries.
"I have to go, but there's a cave nearby, you can stay there. I will come back often to check on your wounds, we can talk and share some food okay?" She gives him a warm smile, he simply nods in return.

Over the next 2-6 weeks or so Evannie comes back every day with bread, berries, and some meat every once in a while. She would talk and tell him stories of her childhood, sometimes crying or laughing over her memories. She talked about her mother and how she loved the peacefulness of this place. She tells Thar she thinks her mother was killed by orcs when she was four years old. Every day she would always bring flowers and set them next to the Stone, sometimes she would kneel and pray before it, holding an amulet of her mother's. Evannie and Thar seem to quickly bond with each other. She would poke and play fight with Thar, though he would never "throw" a punch at her. He would act as if he was hurt and fall over. She would often laugh the day away or sing and hum songs for Thar, other days she would just vent her stress or grief.



Then Evannie stopped coming for a while, Thar growing worried as to why, when she returned it seems orcs have been in the woods around her home. It has become hard for her to get out of her town as most of the villagers are afraid, and for good reason. Later that day Thar stops dead in his tracks, something has drifted in with the wind. A smell he knew far too well, the orcs are coming again. He knew what would happen if they saw Evannie. He quickly grabs her and starts running.
"Arthur what is it?!" She struggles to keep up with him, but Thar only stops to turn and pointing to himself, he snarls loudly and points off back the way they came. Her eyes widen as she begins to realize that it was orcs, sniffing the air he can tell they are catching up faster than she can run, moving off to a small cave shape of roots big enough for Evannie only. He points to the roots looking at her, she doesn't move. He pushes her to the roots and points at the ground as if saying to "Stay" with a firm grunt.
Evannie shakes her head "Please don't go hide with me Arthur!" Shaking his head Thar taps on his nose as if saying they can smell us. He starts to turn away to run but she grabs him, giving him a hug she tells him.
"Come back okay, you have to come back." She hands him her mother's amulet. "See you have to come back, to return my mother's amulet okay." Tears roll down her face, Thar simply nods in return pushing her back to the small cave of roots. He moves away a bit and stands waiting for the orcs. When they come into view they roar seeing Thar, he snarls back motioning them to come for him before he turns on his heels and runs for it, the orcs don't even question it and take chase.

Fleeing he tries to make a circle and break for the water, in hopes to have them lose his scent. Just as he rounds a tree closing in on the water he gets whacked right in the face, stumbling back he swings at his attacker with his fist. Only this time another club hits him from behind, dropping to his hands and knees he looks up at the warrior. The Orc simply grins as Agronak steps out.
"You have given us enough trouble! Come along, it's time we leave, the war has destroyed our home so now we move." Looking at the other orcs Agronak snarls at them. "Chain him and have him pull the supplies!" Agronak actives the blood rune forcing Thar to not resist as he gets Dragged away.


Age: 16-18 The Long Road to the Sword Coast.

The Kogan Tribe continued to move from place to place until they finally made it to, the Sword Coast. now the next chapter shall be written in blood or tears. Let's find out.




Goals:
Find the Orcs a real home.
Reestablish the Kogan clan.
Gain the formal Title of War chief
Have the Kogan clan become the elite Guard for Uruk Lurra
Establish Trade partners with other monster races.
Survive.
Updated:
Take charge over the Orc clan, regardless of being a half-orc.
Defeat Bak, and claim his hat!


Possible Plot-Hook Ideas and Misc Facts:
Yak-Kak is a Kobold the DMs can use for a Plot hook for Thar

This was the toughest part of my Back story, I was debating on having Thar be forced to Kill Evannie or let her live for a plot twist later, If it wasn't clear enough, Evannie is Thar's Half-sister though none of them have pieced it together Yet. ///PLOT TWIST///
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Age 18: The Story Grows!!

Part 1:New threats, New loves.

After quite some time of traveling, Kogan clan finally settles down in the land of the Sword Coast. While wondering about in search of a new place to put up Orchold Boss Kogan, runs into an elf known as Celasorsan Longfeather or Jester Elf-king. Who knows what reason Elf Jester had to anger Boss but after some heated words, Elf-king decides to threaten Boss, in return Boss informs him that such treats will force War between Doron Amar, and Clan Kogan! Something about Burning the village, killing the women, and eating the children.
Shortly after the Elves begin to hunt the Kogans down, yet some how we manage to get away each time. Barely escaping with our lives, or a "friend" that comes in at the last second to Teleport the bodies away and raise us. Many begin to hunt us even with out knowing the reason for doing so. They murder us when we have done nothing but try and survive, and now in return we have to resort to fighting back. Our Allies and enemies grow daily.


As for Dah, being only half bread and with out full speech he has been able to sit among the others, he listens to their hate filled words but finds hope in one. An Elf by the name of Nil. Her calming manner and fun loving nature seems to keep Dah from being to wild. Able to enjoy her company with out the threats of war something Sparks in Dah, a feeling most of his kind do not care for. In the end this lead to a Bond Dah hasn't had in quite some time, and now he will cling to it, in hopes that one day something will come of it.

Part 2: To hell and back. New voice!

A few weeks pass as the "war" continues on, new bond are forged with some allies we never would have expected to gain, Trust on the other hand is another story. Agronak begins to make ties to the Dark elves in hopes to fund our "armies" to burn Doron Amar. Agronak has Dah join him on one of his trips to the Underdark to inform the dark elves of trades and issues arising on the surface. Little did Dah know Agronak had something special for him as well.

Taken to a room blindfold like normal, the smell of blood would wash over Dah, chains rattle in the air as the door is unlock only to be locked shortly after entering. The dark elf sits him down speaking softly into his ear as if a friend to him, as she slowly locks the binds around his arms and legs.
(((DUE TO SERVER RULES, I will give you a little taste of what Dah went though but know it was Much much worse IC, even if we did not emote it.)))
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She steps forward. She would wear long claws on each finger, ending in mithril tips. She traces them along his skin teasingly, seeming to be quite kind as she goes about securing him to the chair. "What is your name?"
"A har Thar."
She says one word in response, immediately. "Corellon."
He gives a snort of disdain
"We'll start with Corellon." Backhands him as she says the word. "He is the overall god of the Elves, the one who has cursed us -all- orc."
Dah grunts in pain.
"-Corellon-" Slaps "has betrayed us, and left his elves on the surface to hunt orcs and keep us down below. This pain is so that you don't forget it, and you will thank me for it."
Dah would try and snap at the hand that hits him.
She steps behind him. "Worse follower of Corellon" Slaps "is Shevarash." With that, she would puncture him a single time in the back with one of the thin claws non-lethally, and not too deep. However it would be very painful. "Do you feel that?" She leans close, whispering into his ear. "That is what the Elves wish to do with you. Shoot you in the back and hurt you, except this ends in mercy from us, they will have none."
He would Roar in Pain that echos in the halls.
"Sheverash," Punctures again, it would seem to be a lesson of pain association, as she whispers calmly in his ear. "will see you dead and shot repeatedly while down, they enjoy vengeance and your pain. But you're not the villain, they are!"
Dah begins to breath heavily, fading in an out from pain.
She clenches her jaw, and kneels down, grabbing his right hand. She takes the tumb, and inserts the claw underneath his thumbnail, prying it from the finger. "Elves... are their tools.."
Roaring loudly Dah tugs at his bonds trying to break free.
Grabbing a vial of acid, she would splash it on him with the next line. "Humans, halflings, dwarves, they're all allies of the elves, they wish to see us suffer!"
Dah Roars loudly again as his mind fades filling with anger. "Kill. . . All. . ."
(((Stopping here it would continue, basically in a manner of brain washing using pain to force hate at the other races. This is going to have a heavy IG effect on him)))
After all was over Dah is covered in new scars, wounds, and broken, a new found hatred would fill his being. With anger clouding his mind who know what he might do, who he might hurt, or what will happen between Nil and himself. Due to the heavy mental strain Dah finally breaks down one wall, he begins to speak again. Even if he is only saying basic words mainly. "Kill all elves."
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Part 3: Freedom, and Confusion.

As the days go by, the proud Clan once known as Kogan begins to fade, many of the orcs killed off by elves and men alike. Boss has vanish, most likely killed by someone, perhaps Agronak was the one who did it trying to take over. Henk has been out scouting most of the time, what info he will being might be quite useful. As for Myself, I keep to my cave anger still strong in my heart. I made many trips into the Woods stumbling upon a cave filled with Minotaur I unleash my rage upon them taking anything I can find including their horns. Weeks have past with no work from the Bloody Hand. Agronak takes to the road to report back in person, this leaves the Kogan with out a leader and soon chaos breaks out with in the ranks. Our group is falling, and despite being a half-orc, perhaps Kruc'lok or myself should step up and take control before we kill each other off.

Then again with Boss and Agronak gone, am I finally free of my cursed bond? Do I have to stay?


Part 4: Friend or Foe?

A new Orc has shown up, at the Kogan's camp. This old and aging Orc seemed out of place the moment he walked into camp. His gray, balding hair gives away his age, despite his stylish goatee. An eye patch over one of his eyes as he scans the leaderless orcs. Walking with spear in hand he stands in the center of the camp making a claim he comes from the Bloody Hand, may of the orc ignore him. With a slight chuckle he shrugs it off and begins to leave, with my curiosity peaked I choose to follow him. He slowly makes his way South to the goblin village of Xvarts, here he shows his true power as he easily slays countless numbers of Goblins using the holy power of Gruumsh. Despite his age this is one orc you do not want to cross.

After a moment I join him in slaying the goblins, but only for a short time before this Orc named Harek begins to tire in his old age. Heading South we pass by Nashkel, here we run into some human woman and at first I expect to be told to kill her, but that didn't happen. Instead Harek called the small woman a Halfling as she was magicly reduced, she then got somewhat angry or annoyed by this and simply tells him "No". Harek laughs tell myself that we have a feisty one here. As the day goes on we converse with the Woman, now known as Noela, often slipping into Orcish with our insults. When Noela question us as to what we have been saying in orc we trick her into the thinking the orcish word for "Halfwit" ((Rhah^fran)) means "beautiful woman" in common as well as the Orcish word for "imbecile" ((Arpozaho)) also means "gorgeous" in the common language. Oh what a fun day that was.

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Part 5: War Boss!! Death Knights
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As the day comes to a close the Kogan clan gathers once more at Chiontar River, the days hunt laying by the fire as the orc feast. As night sets in a few orcs fight to test their might, other gather to talk of the Bloody hand alliance full forces, some talk about how much the scouting party has dwindled. Agronak has left information of his return to the main forces to inform them of the situation here.

With no leader in sight Dah finally takes a stand forcing a Challenge. In a bellowing roar Dah claim the title of War Boss for the Kogan Scouting clan, with the lack of moral none rise to challenge him. That is until Nudakk steps from the near by woods to claiming no Half bread should hold such a rank.

With the challenge made the Nudakk quickly takes to his blades while Dah stands firm with out a weapon in hand. As the "battle" begins Dah dodges the flash of daggers coming for him, and with a single punch lays Nudakk out on the floor. Dah chuckles and is declared War Boss.

As the night winds down, most of the orcs fall asleep but for those who stayed awake this night would see something strange. With only a little flicker left from the fire the darkness would roll in around them, a low mist fills the air some strange figures can be seen moving at supernatural speeds. Dah rises and follows shift the blindfold off one of his eyes letting him see clearly in the night. Wondering about aimlessly he quickly moves to wake some near by orcs, the shaman included, finally after some time voices could be heard. The group slowly moves closer to the source.

As the darkness pulls away the image of a unnaturally large, dead flaming horse lays limp on the ground under it a huge, bone figure with glowing red eyes. It seams to be speaking to someone, Dah gives the order to spread out and go quitely, Nudakk slips into the shadow and works his way around. The air is filled with the smell of death, as they grow closer, around is a mass of dead warriors. As they finally grow close enough 3 of the 4 orcs step forth to find a lone paladin woman ready to finish of the large Death Knight.


Death Knight: Someone else is here paladin... We are not alone in this conflict.

Groomka: *whispered* I smell undead here, chieftain. *makes sure Harek heard that too*

Dah Kogan: *snorts* Advance Kogans! *looks to the large death night and the Paladin*

Death Knight: I know someone is out there, I see someone behind that tree. Save me from this intolerant human, All I did was ask her band of knights some innocent questions.

Harek Kogan: *grins widely* Gladly. *walks into view of the Death Knight*

Death Knight: Who is that? *looking at Harek* You are not human. *Still pinned by the flaming dead steed.* Why don't you get this thing off me and we can kill this human together, whoever you are. I will reward you.

Harek Kogan: I be Harek, Shaman of the Kogan Tribe and Warpriest of He-Who-Never-Sleeps.

Death Knight: Harek? One-Eye *the skeleton knight grins with his bony jaw* the orc god?

Harek Kogan: Yes. One-Eye. He-Who-Watches, creator and master of orcs. We are the Kogan Tribe. We are a nomadic clan, these are weak human lands.

Death Knight: I see. These are your lands then? Know then that I have no quarrel with your kind. I came only for information for my masters in the north. Until I was waylaid by these awful paladins and they slew my poor ride. I managed to skewer the lot of them except their leader here. *he laughs, his large bony jaw jittering.*

Harek Kogan: Meet our chieftain, Dah. I am sure he would take on the weak human paladin.

Dah Kogan: *Grins* You are Right Harek, This one is mine. *he flourish his blade as he moves closer to the paladin*

Traveling Paladin: Orcs! *frowns* A bad situation just got worse *looks about* Stay back orcs! I do not wish to harm you as well! *She swivels her sword around at them in a circle, shield up.*

Groomka: You is gonna have the honor of dying to the chieftain himself, pinkskin. *shouts at the paladin*

Traveling Paladin: Join me in purging this evil. *she says diplomatically*

Dah Kogan: *looks to Harek* This one is Mine Shaman. Show me what your Honor is Worth Filth *looks to the Paladin*

Traveling Paladin: This need not end violently, orc. I am not from around here. I mean you no ill nor have I done anything wrong to your race.

Dah Kogan: We may not be your pray this day, but soon perhaps, Many have hunted us until our clan is nearly gone!

Traveling Paladin: What will it be then orcs? Join with me and rid the forest of this undead or unecessarily kill.

Dah Kogan: I do not trust filthy humans, this day you die wench! *he steps forth* Prepare yourself! *he takes a fighting stance*

Traveling Paladin: So be it... In the name of Helm, I will defend the honor of my quest. *she throws her shield to the ground and wields her sword two handed.*

Dah Kogan: What is your name Paladin

Traveling Paladin: Knight Lalona. Remember this name, for it may be the knight's name that set you out of the way of the will of Helm and righteousness.

Dah Kogan: I will remember you, for your Bravery to face Dah, War boss of the Kogans!

In a flash of sparks the two blade clash in the air, as the woman is knocked back by the power of the towering half orc, as he comes forward for a second blow she moves just slightly faster and cuts a gash along Dah's side. In a rage Dah raises his sword for one last strike just as the paladin does so too, holy light wraps around her blade as she charges at Dah. Blood fills the air, The paladin falls dead to the ground, her armor clanking on the grassy forest floor.

Death Knight: Good show, orcs! Bravo! Now, could we please get this dead flaming horse off me. I have to give you your reward.

Dah Kogan: *To the Deathknight* And now, why are you here Bone one?

Death Knight: Why am I here... I have come from my masters in the north,to learn all I can about these Western Heartlands.

Harek Kogan: An invasion?

Death Knight: Invasion *laughs* Nay Nay. Some noisy adventurers, I am sure you know the type. They have been up in our business in the north. We had no interest in these lands until they came. We are looking to see if these bands coming into our territory are a threat or not. Just as you assess those that enter your lands. *Motions to the dead paladin.*

Dah Kogan: What Information have you and your Comrades gathered so far.

Death Knight: I'm not sure as of yet. I have been in the field for some time. I would need to return to know what others do now. I serve three commanders I call master. It just depends on the assignment who is my chief as you orcs would say.

Dah Kogan: I have Request, aside from your "rewards" we would also like some of the info you gather, on your trips here and back. In return any info we gather shall be shared with you.
Death Knight: Those terms are agreeable. I see no reason why my masters will not agree as well. This is in addition to getting this flaming dead steed off me and me throwing you some gold for that.

Dah Kogan: *nods twice* Good, While I will not ask you to get directly involved with our affairs, I do expect our agreement to be held.

Death Knight: Free! Thank you, orcs. As promised *he takes out a few bags of gold and tosses them around.* If that is all, I leave you. The masters call me home. I will be journeying back north.

Dah Kogan: *nods to the Massive Death Knight* Remember, For I am Dah, War Boss of the Kogans, we await your return . I will look forward to your logs of Information later.

Death Knight: *Turns and waves to Dah* Farewell Dah, tribe of Kogan orcs.

///Thank you Dialectic for the Wonderful Event!!!///
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DM Dialectic wrote:If orcs of the Bloody Hand were to stay up late into the evening north of the Chiontar River, some may notice strange dark riders traveling at supernatural speeds in erratic directions, but never south of the river. Some in the tribe may grow curious at the bizarre riders and wish to investigate them.
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Part 6: Prove yourself! New Rival!!

Dah stumbles upon a flyer that catches his eye. Finely drawn blades clashing in the upper left hand of the page, a few words Dah is manage to read are fight, gold, and battle. With a grin he takes the flyer back to the Kogan camp, in hopes to have the Shaman Harek explain more to him what the page means. When Dah finally learns what the event is all about he chuckles as it would be a perfect time to show the might of Kogan Clan.

For the day leading up to the Tournament Dah spent his time training fighting minotaur and bugbears. Learning a few "Tricks" on how to take his enemies down as quickly as possible, on the final night before the Tournament Dah remembers hearing about a powerful mage inside the haunted house deep in the Cloakwoods. As a final challenge to see if he was ready he charges into the house, taking down a few bone knights and vampires as he makes his way up. Finally the moment came where Dah stood before the door to where the mage was said to live, bursting in he is meet with a large Dark being from another plane. At first Dah was horrified by the creature he never seen before, but his fear quickly vanished as he went into a frenzy. It was Fight or die! In a rage Dah managed to clear the room and sitting at his feet, the dead wizard killed so quickly it did not even have time to cast a spell. He was ready, spending the night at the Kogan camp he saw to his wounds be healed and was well rested.

The day has come, Dah makes his way North to the location of the Tournament with a new set of armor on and a helm to match, blade close at hand as he slowly makes his way forward. It is clear a lot of the people there did not want the half orc there. Simply walking up to the woman running the event he pays his fee and moves off to the side waiting for his first match. Shortly after the names are called.
Damariel vs Dah.
Moving into the ring Dah draws forth his falchion and takes his place at the line, the match ends as quickly as it starts. Dah slams his blade next to the mans head snarling as he see that its an elf under the hood, it takes every bit of Dah's willpower to not end the elf here and now. He rips his blade from the ground and leave the arena for the next match. As the battles continue Dah realizes his next challenger will be a halfling, and when the battle was about to begin Dah was a little over confident thinking this halfling was a joke.
Tommy vs Dah
The battle begins and the Halfing lets lose a volley of bolts that happen to be quite powerful, Dah has underestimated his opponent. Realizing the trouble Dah quickly rushes forth using his blade to throw some dirt into the archers eyes, while it may be fighting dirty this is how an Orc would fight. In a fury of quick attacks Dah manages to take the halfling down, but not before taking more hit then he intended.
Sevta vs Dah
For the final match it turn out Dah will be taking on the Paladin woman that set up the event herself. This woman has proved to be quite trouble some to the other entries, and for this Dah wished to be careful with this woman taking up a shield for the first time. When the match begins it seems rather even, none have been able to land a blow. Sevta hit Dah a few time forcing him into a frenzy rage, Knocking the woman down before throwing away his shield to wield his blade with two hands. With this Dah is able to overpower her shield and break her guard to take her down. Victory! Dah walks of to have his wounds treated when he spots Klahwa hiding in the crowd, standing together they watch the upper division as a large half orc stroms up to Sevta saying Bak wants to fight.
Bak vs Dah!!!

With Sevta refusing to let Bak join in the tournament, Dah sees this giant of a half-orc and wishes to challenge him. Regardless of what the others Say Dah and Bak step into the ring, drawing a great axe to match Bak's, ready for a real fight. Some of the crowd seems not to care about the fight, yet the rest turn to watch the battle between the two brutes. This was no battle of swordsmanship, this was purely a battle of brawn as the two threw themselves at each other with all the power behind them. Their blades sparked and crack at the force behind each strike, the ringing of the blades enough to make the ears bleed. For a time the two seem evenly matched, but soon it shows that Bak has seen far more battles then Dah has. Bak's movements are just fast enough to overwhelm Dah getting a few good blows here and there as the two forget about defending themselves and go toe to toe. In the end Bak stands over Dah, both heavily wounded from the force of the blows. The two give each other a warriors respect and move apart. Dah swears to beat him one day and claim his hat as a prize!
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///Minor updates.///
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