Young Knight Commander Shanks Meets Baby Jessie Neige.

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ITankCrits
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Young Knight Commander Shanks Meets Baby Jessie Neige.

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I walked until I got close to the temple, as it’s walls got into my site, it caught my attention, I stopped, just stared at it, and questioned everything ever taught to me, how to live, how survive, how to care, how to pray, how to lead, how to kill, how to fight, how to love, how to believe in her frozen name without question. For the first time I felt lost, how did something like that happen to someone like me? I felt nothing, all the memories of my life flashed before my eyes. I lost myself became the shadows I danced with. I slowly stepped away and I backed off. I walked back up the path, sat against the wall of the building behind me. I took a breath. It was a mild blizzard today, the best kind of winter, the kind equivalent to ones cloudy blue skies, calm breeze, bright colored flowers on a sunny Spring day. It's the same feeling, just like you it’s how you grew up, it’s what you know and held close to your heart, but for us this, this always felt the most like home. Thick cloudy blue skies, an iced dense mist wind that consumed the entire area, any where you went the cold seemed followed you, making us feel safe. Snowflakes so thick they could lightly break through to the soft wind breeze. I let each settle all over me, careful sitting still trying not to disturb them, I felt relaxed like a hadn't in such a long time, either that or I was dying very quickly, probably both. I closed my eyes, let my mind go blank, feeling nothing but winters softest touch, all the pain finally went away,

“Nora, I miss you so much, it scares how much sometimes, I am angry all the time, it's the last thing I ever feel, before the pure rage takes me over. I don’t know if I’m strong enough, I don’t know if I can do this anymore. Give me a sign please, or let me come join you…”

I sat in silence, feeling the cold creep all over my body. Is this how it ends? The great Knight Commander Shanks dies a forgotten drunk, assassinated in a dark alley just like the other “Heros”? And I wondered why Vel Trax never wanted to be an officer, it's too much work. My body went numb, only the sound of silent whispers of her frozen breath. She was there, she was always there, right beside me, and I was too blind to see. What a shame it's too late to want to change, to find that hero, a true Aurilite hero, if they even exist. I start to hear a child’s cry in my head, every second it I felt it was getting closer. This was it, I could feel it, the crying echoed louder in my head as the shadows reached out to steal my last breath. Then the crying suddenly trailed its way up the temples path. I open my eyes starring straight into the eyes of a small female child stained of blood, being carried away by a hooded being. I quickly sit up, letting the snow bounce off of me. The Child stops for a second as she seems to spot me, then starts to scream even louder for help. I push the rusty end of the scythe into the ground to pull myself up. I grabbed as much snow as I can, stuffing it in my wound, packing all in hard to slow down the bleeding. I tightly grip my new rusty farmer weapon in my hand once more. I took a moment to find my balance, then started walking down the path, slowly making my way to ask what they needed with such a defenseless little girl.


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Re: Young Knight Commander Shanks Meets Baby Jessie Neige.

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I read it
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